Monday, December 10, 2012

Self Evaluation


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            English 15s has been a journey through the arts. This class has made me grow as a writer and helped me recognize and appreciate the arts at Penn State. This semester not only taught me how to improve my writing, but also helped me grow as a person. I was never a very strong writer, but this class has pushed me to challenge my methods and style of writing.
The visual argument essay was my first step when trying to challenge myself. When learning about pathos, ethos, and logos I realized that I never actually thought about those things when writing a paper. I always was aware of the fact that my paper needed to have an argument, but never truly focused on it. This class has taught me how to prove my argument and prove each type in a different way. Certain types of arguments, such as visual arguments, need visual analysis and descriptive detail. This semester I learned how to approach this in a way that wouldn’t make the details too overwhelming, but still enough to show the facts behind my argument. This semester I worked on adding pathos into my writing. At first I had a lot of trouble with this because I found it hard to add emotions in to an English paper. The visual analysis paper helped me overcome this obstacle because the piece I chose was full of emotion. In order to prove my argument the tone of the piece had to be translated into my paper. This assignment helped me add pathos and taught me exactly how to do that. I felt that the blog was also very helpful in this class. Writing in my own blog and commenting on other student’s blogs has taught me the difference between formal and informal writing. The blog was a place for me to have my own voice and express my own personality.
This class has also taught me a lot about the arts here at Penn State. English 15s has opened up my eyes to the various possibilities that this campus has to offer. Attending the Palmer Museum and the Arboretum were my absolute favorite things when it came to the arts at Penn State. As a freshman, I was unaware of everything Penn State had, and attending these various places was interesting and beautiful to see. When you are a college student you are so focused on your work, you never have the time to appreciate the arts and other things around you. This class has given me the time and opportunity to become one with my surroundings. I can now say to my friends back at home that Penn State is a beautiful campus, even past the things you see everyday. The play that we saw was also something I really appreciated during this class. Of course this was a fun assignment to begin with, but after actually seeing and writing the blog post, I was able to appreciate the arts even more. These were students singing and acting and I found it to be absolutely amazing.
            I learned a lot from this class, even as a person. The final assignment was a great way for me to build as a writer because I can work on my own mistakes in a memoir that I had previously written. I think this class has truly helped me grow as a person, but especially guided me in my journey to becoming more of a confident writer. This was the first class I attended here at Penn State University, and it made me feel comfortable in getting used to the college experience. 
                                          
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3) Hi, Ms. S--I completed my SRTEs!

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